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Tourist Trap
Author: Lonely Puppet
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(Added on May 26, 2007)
(This month 23515 readers) (Total 44986 readers) |
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A vacation to Japan takes a turn for the worse when a tourist meets a female martial artist who loves to torture, rape, and enslave men. If Part 1 is well recieved I'll continue the story. |
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Weighed
Average (?): (7/10) |
Average
Rating: (7.5/10) |
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Reviewer:
azrlg17
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Jun 5, 2007 |
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It's better than your 1st story. At least he doesn't break in the 1st night. But I still find it too short. His first 2 nights of slavery are described and then there's a big jump described like "and this continued for a month". Then he tries to escape once and is caught (it seems by sheer luck). She punishes him and then he never tries anything ever again and is happy to be a slave. That's still too fast. In most nc stories on this site the victim holds out, holds out, holds out and then breaks. I think someone would first try to hold out, then act as if broken and still try to escape. (6/10)
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Reviewer:
mkemse
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May 31, 2007 |
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nice i dea of a Fedom sotry that is NC and cbt (7/10)
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Reviewer:
slaveneedledick
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May 29, 2007 |
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Very good story the plot was great. (8/10)
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Reviewer:
sissymaid
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May 27, 2007 |
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great story and look forward to reading more.sure others will rate it highly too. (9/10)
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