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The Proper Ways
Author: GhostWriter
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(Added on Jun 2, 2007)
(This month 71486 readers) (Total 89668 readers) |
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On a continent of snow and ice, the people show the proper way of doing things |
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Weighed
Average (?): (6.5/10) |
Average
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Highest
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Lowest
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Reviewer:
bmtphoenix
(Edit) |
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Sep 24, 2007 |
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Eh, what? I just kind of ended...without an ending. (5/10)
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Reviewer:
Mad Lews
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Jun 4, 2007 |
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A start to a story with great potential. I want to see where you go with it. An independent proof reader would help to clean up those grammar glitches (7/10)
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Reviewer:
GuiltyKarma
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Jun 3, 2007 |
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i loved it. Very erotic and expressively written. A few minor spelling and grammatical errors. i look forward to reading much more! (9/10)
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