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Cousin's Weekend Slave
Author: Max
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(Added on Oct 7, 2007)
(This month 79221 readers) (Total 109157 readers) |
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This is a story about what happened to me when I lost a bet to my cousin and she turned me into her slave. |
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Average (?):  (5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
Rocky
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Oct 12, 2007 |
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I must agree with the previous reviewers, but not only are the number of spelling and grammatical errors distracting, the plot itself needs some work. It is an old, tired story line, but could be improved with a more descriptive effort. (5/10)
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| Reviewer:
slaveneedledick
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Oct 8, 2007 |
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The concept was a good concept however proof reading the story before publishing would have helped. (5/10)
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| Reviewer:
trainmanretep
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Oct 7, 2007 |
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OK concept but do your self a favor and find some one to edit your stories. There are some errors that distract. Without these I would given a somewhat higher rating. (5/10)
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