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Her Last Day
Author: Dominica Potestas
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(Added on Jul 24, 2008)
(This month 54277 readers) (Total 68387 readers) |
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Ally discovers the depths of Illakians' indifference to the sufferings of a sub-human as she falls foul of the law. |
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Weighed
Average (?): (6.5/10) |
Average
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Reviewer:
Chuckdom19
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Jul 31, 2008 |
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anxious for more. You could use and editor to help you (7/10)
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Reviewer:
masterdw
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Jul 30, 2008 |
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It is not bad, but your spelling and use of English needs improvement (6/10)
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Reviewer:
ukMasterC
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Jul 30, 2008 |
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Good start - look forward to reading the rest of it. (7/10)
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