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A Victorian Pony Girl Author: A.Broadsword
(Added on Sep 10, 2008) (This month 30866 readers) (Total 50113 readers)
Fanny persuades her sister May that being a Pony Girl in London is a good career choice but May becomes a Yorkshire Pony Girl something rather different.

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Weighed Average (?): (6/10)
Average Rating: (6.5/10)
Highest Rating: (10/10)
Lowest Rating: (2/10)

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Reviewer: darwin (Edit) Rating: Sep 15, 2012
I thought it was extremely well-written. I sympathize with reader who found the story inaccessible (I found Broadsword's recent "Marathon Man' story difficult). But I thought the style understandable and engaging. The story itself was wickedly sexy. I'd like to see more of this story and more writing like this. (10/10)

Reviewer: nassim (Edit) Rating: May 3, 2011
Oh yeah... (10/10)

Reviewer: sheilagirl (Edit) Rating: Sep 17, 2008
Ponygirlism is one of my favorite subjects of all time. I dreamed of it first as a pre-teen growing up on the farm before I ever knew anyone else had this fantasy. Because of this I can't be so harsh in judging this story. I didn't care so much about the "oldye" part but appreciated the attempt and commend the writer for creating a rather erotic scene. Keep writing! (6/10)

Reviewer: H Dean (Edit) Rating: Sep 16, 2008
The writing, without the attempt at old English is poor, at best. Adding the old English only makes it worse, especially when one has no clue how to use the language properly.
(2/10)

Reviewer: DarkHorseSr (Edit) Rating: Sep 13, 2008
To much of the old English Lower life language. (3/10)

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