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Weighed
Average (?):  (8.5/10) |
Average
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| Reviewer:
Martiniman
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Jan 11, 2012 |
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An excellent story! Only wish there were one more closing chapter. (10/10)
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| Reviewer:
JimmyJump
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Jan 6, 2012 |
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Some run-on sentences and unnecessary vagueness in combination with a certain clumsiness in the writing make that "Taking Advantage..." doesn't come across as erotic as it could have, just because of the aformentioned hampering the reader's mind from getting in the right mood.
The story is great though, with some vivid imagination on display.
Such a pity that the story is all over the place thanks to continuity problems and lots of blanks in-between happenings.
Still a nice read, but lots of room for improvement.
JJ (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
ThFH
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Apr 29, 2011 |
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I like this story in a way very much like staceys job. I like the human christmas tree and the way jess keeps her slaves. I hope you will write a new part very soon (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
Dryhill
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May 10, 2010 |
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Good characterization and plenty going on, so a good story. My only complaint is about Little Lou, captured and ringed in a week now keeping a, to her, unknown women on the edge of orgasm for two hours, would she be able to?
I hope we learn more of what happened over Christmas, especially Christmas day. (10/10)
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| Reviewer:
AndreaDawne
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Nov 8, 2008 |
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Its a great start in this story. Love it! I can not wait to see what's in store for Sarah and how she will react to this BDSM style. And would Emma keep her promise to Jess? I'd like to see what happens next. (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
jkim
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Nov 5, 2008 |
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gyrl juices muchly at the start. hope it keeps going and getting hotter! (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
dadisch
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Nov 4, 2008 |
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What a wonderful start. I look forward to the next chapter. (9/10)
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