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Peggy\\\'s 3 Days 2 Nights In Phuket
Author: Sengkang
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(Added on Oct 27, 2010)
(This month 11395 readers) (Total 14340 readers) |
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Obsessed with BDSM for years, Peggy finally accept an invitation to a 3D2N session with a Couple DOM. Be it on impulse or from overbearing caged desire, Peggy finally had her virgin real-time session. |
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Weighed
Average (?): (4.5/10) |
Average
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Reviewer:
JimmyJump
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Oct 28, 2010 |
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Sengkang clearly hasn't English as first language; for that there's way too many little irksome mistakes. The story suffers from that, but also from the oddly constructed sentences, the switching of past to present tense and from a lack of technical skill. While the effort to come up with a decent story is there, Sengkang uses too many clichés to keep the read interesting. JJ (4/10)
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