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The Summer Dress
Author: Everybody_Else
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(Added on Nov 13, 2010)
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This is my second story about select self bondage adventures from my past. This one I particularly liked a lot. |
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| Reviewer:
JimmyJump
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Nov 27, 2010 |
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Very well written and perceptive story with good descriptions of surroundings and feelings.
A few silly spelling mistakes and a couple of errors in the rather complicated restraints, but not to an extent you might want to migrate and become a collector of Inuit stamps.
Only thing I would really have liked to see is the alternating between regular- and italic font to distinguish the difference between the 'real' story and our soccer mom's imaginings...
JJ (9/10)
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- Replied by:
Everybody_Else
(Edit) (Nov 27, 2010)
- Thank you very much for your kind words. The silly spelling mistakes are partly my lack of proper english and partly because I failed in the proof reading phase. I am trying to do better in my other stories and in the future. Another error is of course the classic error of moving blocks of text to get the flow right. Sometimes you end of messing up more than flowing :)
And in the original text I did alternate between italic and regular font.
"Soccer Mum"? No Sir. I have no children. Not counting Hubby.
- Replied by:
JimmyJump
(Edit) (Nov 28, 2010)
- Haha... Wasn't referring to you when I wrote soccer mom... It's because you once referred to the main character as being a soccer mom that I called her that in the review.
The different fonts not showing in the uploaded draft could have to do with errors in the site's software script. Lately, there's even little question marks appearing in texts where there should be French accented letters or AZERTY quotation marks...
Thanks for your contributions so far. Even when the content wouldn't be to my complete liking, the writing is of such quality that it'll be a pleasure to (continue) reading them.
JJ
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