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Linda's Medical Nightmare
Author: The Bitchfinder General
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(Added on Jan 28, 2011)
(This month 66166 readers) (Total 96311 readers) |
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Linda finds herself at the mercy of one of her students and the girls' mother. A horrific series of tortures - mainly of a medical nature - results |
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Average (?):  (4/10) |
Average
Rating:  (3.5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
millymooe
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Apr 11, 2011 |
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BUT ...
Please, please continue. Left me just getting damp.
*blush*
Milly (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
Michael247
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Feb 16, 2011 |
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At first I was going to give this a five rating because frankly, despite the choppiness of the writing, skewed plot progression, shallow characters, and unbelievable behaviors, I felt the work had merit. After reading some of the reviews, including the one by Katiesmith, and going to the "Tracey" website, I have to conclude that I was right. The ORIGINAL story had merit and that the the problems I observed in this rendition were the result of a rather poorly executed act of plagiarism.
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There is nothing so immoral as stealing another person's work and making some minor changes and passing it off as their own. It's not only immoral, but decidedly low class. Under certain circumstances it is illegal.
*The BDSM Library should immediately remove Linda's Medical Nightmare and ban "The Bitchfinder General". I recommend everyone email Tiger, the webmaster of the BDSM Library and let him know the situation and ask for removal.
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Yours Faithfully,
Michael Alexander
(www.michaelalexanderstories.com) (1/10)
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| Reviewer:
Katiesmith
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Feb 2, 2011 |
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This guy is a constant pain in the ass! He has been ripping off my stories over the last year or so, he dosent even bother to try and hide it, just re-writes them changing the names and very little else.
He has been banned from various groups for this and he has apologised to me several times for it but yet again I find a "new story" that is a direct copy of my "Tracey's Shamefull Medical" story that has been up on my site for years!
This guy is a talentless theif!!!!!!!!! (1/10)
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- Replied by:
Major Littmann
(Edit) (Feb 3, 2011)
- Curious, he only has one other story on here and I cannot find your profile or indeed "Tracey's Shamefull Medical" anywhere, I really don't know what to think.
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SensoryOverlord
(Edit) (Feb 5, 2011)
- Odd that Katiesmith's profile here is blank. But google finds: http://mle123.co.uk/tracey/
And there's her "Tracey's Shamefull Medical"
Good grief, TBG really did just swap names, and changed the gender of the girl's parent. Stealing a story (and so badly) is so dumb it has to be some kind of mental disorder.
- Replied by:
Michael247
(Edit) (Feb 16, 2011)
- Ms. Smith,
I advise you to immediately contact Tiger, the webmaster for the BDSM Library and report this incident. If nothing else we can have Linda's Medical Nightmare removed and The Bitchfinder General banned. I too have email Tiger and let him know my opinion on the matter. Good luck in whatever action you decide to take against The Bitch General.
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Yours Faithfully,
Michael Alexander
(www.michaelalexanderstories.com)
- Replied by:
your.master
(Edit) (Feb 21, 2011)
- My god! What a shameful behavior.
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| Reviewer:
SensoryOverlord
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Feb 2, 2011 |
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I've totally had it with lazy sods posting miniscule, broken fragments of stories. This one seems like it should be a second chapter, not a first, and just as it's showing potential, it ends! Under 10K! My god, have you no shame?
There's some promise of fine humiliation for the protagonist, but then... ?? Couldn't you wait another week or two, to add some actual content before you posted? Or is it that you can't actually think of anything for these 'experiments', and it's all empty promise?
Plus, the situation you set up is very difficult to believe. It needs much more work to establish that Linda would actually let herself be railroaded like that.
I'm giving it 2, as punishment well deserved. I'd throw in a flogging, if it was possible. Please take this minnow back, and let it grow larger before presenting it again. Your writing has plenty of potential, don't sabotage yourself by offering such tiny portions. (2/10)
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| Reviewer:
Major Littmann
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Jan 28, 2011 |
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It's sort of ok, it sort of ends before it really gets going, lets hope something happens in part 2 (5/10)
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tjlewis132
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Jan 28, 2011 |
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WTF? Is this a random chapter of a story you've forgotten to enter the rest of? Kind of hard to understand what's going on and why... Seems to start off in the middle of a tale. No background on hardly anyone involved, and no real action to boot. Then again, it does say chapter one to begin the tale so I guess that's the way you wanted to start out. Sorry, but a rather poor effort I'm afraid... J LEWIS
(3/10)
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