|
|
|
|
|
Sex Slaves of Kenya
Author: Shabbadew2002
|
| |
(Added on Feb 18, 2011)
(This month 95330 readers) (Total 115312 readers) |
| |
Four couples spend a long weekend at a extreme sex camp in Africa. |
| Ratings and Reviews: |
| Number
of Ratings: 4 |
 |
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
| 1 |
2 |
3 |
4 |
5 |
6 |
7 |
8 |
9 |
10 |
| 0% |
0% |
0% |
0% |
0% |
0% |
0% |
25% |
25% |
50% |
|
Weighed
Average (?):  (8.5/10) |
Average
Rating:  (9.5/10) |
Highest
Rating:  (10/10) |
Lowest
Rating:  (8/10) |
|
|
|
|
| Reviewer:
lonewolf8
(Edit) |
Rating: |
Apr 20, 2011 |
| |
Another good story here for this talented author!
Would have liked a little more descriptiveness, especially what was going on in the females mind during some scenes, but otherwise very good!
Keep the inter-racial stories coming!
(10/10)
|
|
|
|
|
| Reviewer:
jaynecage
(Edit) |
Rating: |
Feb 25, 2011 |
| |
Over all a really good story but i feel a little more detail in the beast scene towards the end would have made it a great story (9/10)
|
| |
- Replied by:
shabbadew2002
(Edit) (Feb 25, 2011)
- Thank you for the kind review. You may want to read my story, Hospitality Parts 2 and 3, for longer beast scenes.
|
|
|
|
|
| Reviewer:
Fessanessa
(Edit) |
Rating: |
Feb 19, 2011 |
| |
I had difficulty rating this story, but finally decided on an 8. This is my favorite author and this is the only story by this author that I have rated below a 10. Certainly, the quality of writing is higher than most other authors on this and other sites. And the content is extreme and intense, as in all this author's stories. Nevertheless, compared to the author's other stories and the high standard they set, this story is less well edited (structural lapses,redundancies, descriptors occasionally coupled with the wrong characters, etc.). Also, compared to the author's other stories, I this one seems more repetitive, almost routinized, and emotionally flat, at least until the bestiality scene at the end, where both the description of the action and the emotions are take us further inside what happens. However, even here, it lacked the raw power and emotional intensity of other bestiality scenes by this author. Again, higher quality than most other stories and authors, but distinctly below the standards set by this author's other stories. One gets the sense that it is time for this author to seek and acquire renewed inspiration in taking different characters and plots in new directions. And I say this as an avid, dedicated reader of this author's stories, who, like the characters in the stories, has discovered things about myself, my life and my family in this author's stories, and has had my life irrevokably changed by reading this author's stories. Yet, as profoundly as this author's stories have probed, moved and changed me, I think it is time to probe, move and change characters and plots in new, fresh directions. (8/10)
|
|
|
|
|
| Reviewer:
sallyannslut
(Edit) |
Rating: |
Feb 19, 2011 |
| |
woneederful tale...can you give out the number to call....... (10/10)
|
| |
- Replied by:
shabbadew2002
(Edit) (Feb 19, 2011)
- Thank you for taking the time to review and rate the story.
|
|
|
About 