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| Reviewer:
lonewolf8
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Apr 19, 2011 |
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Another Winner by this great author of erotica.
I don't often take time to write reviews, not unless the author hits me just right, but this is one of those authors who truly stand out and deserve the extra praise!
A Great story! Terrific plot, good characters, and excellent plot development!
I really, enjoyed this story, especially the parts about the "birth" it was for me, the hottest of scenes, and a good example of this author's real talent at work!
I enjoyed seeing the Mother and daughter's descent into shame and humiliation and the depictions of both mental and physical torture and abuse.
One aspect I enjoy with this writers erotic stories is his depictions of the female's enjoyment against their will during the torture and forced sex, despite the shame and humiliation.
To me, that is essential to the story line of any good erotic rape fantasy story. A lot of authors do not get it right in my opinion and have the female either become too much of a willing and active participant, (which to me begins to take away from the rape fantasy completely, because it loses the forced element) or they go in the other direction and have the entire rape fantasy be about the girl just being in so much pain and misery, with no element of forced pleasure, it is not erotic at all...
Rape fantasy is just that, a fantasy. A lot of females enjoy reading rape fantasy as well as males, and I would venture to say, most, would agree it is much hotter when the female is having some forced pleasure against her will, rather than a long onslaught of just pain and misery.
This author seems to have a deep understanding of that crucial element and to me, it sets him leagues above a lot of other authors on here!
Great work! (8/10)
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maryrobyn
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this story was an excellent one depicting the courage of a mother & daughter under torture & in agony. They stayed true to their honor as long as they could. The best part tome was the 58 yr old mother whohad given birth 3 times. When thretened with the instant baby torture sh knew what she was in for yet thse bravely told her torturers to go to hell!! She was very brave. The daughter too was really worked over but her honor oath gave her strength. Ths is a wothy sequel to the ROOM 29 story. I hope there will be even more sequels. More interview with the sadistic guards as they recall the good times!! Excellent story!! (10/10)
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Michael247
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Usually I have something to say, some pithy comment that sets a tone. But today only one word comes to mind. "Yuck".
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Okay, let's get started with "The Interrogation of a Mother and Daughter". In this story we are treated to a sort of transcript of an interview with two old Stasi prison guards. They are a married couple and recount to a young and pretty reporter some of the tortures they inflicted upon their charges while serving in the East Berlin prison. In order to get a complete story, the reporter encourages them to tell her of one prisoner's ordeal, and gets two, the recollection of a mother and daughter who had been arrested and tortured for information.
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As far as plots go, this one is pretty cool. Sure, we've had lots of German torture stories, hell, I've even written one called "The Museum of Inquisition". But rather than falling back on the age old Nazi scapegoat, the author chose to give Communism a go and added a refreshing twist to the setting. The interview is a wonderful methodology for getting out the information, adding a sort of "inquisitor" character who could draw additional information out of the Stasi guards. Lastly, the tortures endured by the mother and daughter were extreme and the progression rather well done.
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Grammatically, the were very few errors that I noticed, (two that I recall) and they were both so minor they could be from anyone's story. I would advise the author however to try and use some compound sentences. Almost every sentence was simple. This does make the telling straight forward, but compound sentences add a complexity and depth to your work which attracts higher level readers. It's the difference between "See Jack run" and "See Jack run, while Jill followed behind, carrying the bucket." Just by the nature of compound sentence structure, you'll add more detail to your narrative.
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This story wasn't very sexual, at least for me, until we got to the torture of the daughter with the balloons. How creative. I applaud the author for either his research capabilities or his imagination, which ever was the source for that hideous torment. Oddly enough, I felt the sexual tension there and it was pretty good. The rest of the tortures were rather blase on sex and high on the "eeewww" factor.
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Part of my problem was the unemotional way the torments were described by the Stasi guards. It was fairly obvious that the author wanted us to understand that this couple felt no remorse about the horrible things they did to the people remanded to their prison. So the descriptions were by necessity, lacking in emotion. But this is where I think a few well placed questions by Angelika, the reporter, could have been better applied. A quick "how did you feel about that?" or "what do you think she felt when you did that to her?" would have provided some emotional content, thus improving tension and giving some spice to the actual meat of the story.
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I also liked the introduction of Doctor Zhang as well as his more medical procedure type torments. In fact, I couldn't help thinking of Dr. Wu from "Toying With Tiffany", one of my favorite BDSM story series. Maybe Zhang and Wu are related. Who knows, right? In any event, as I mentioned, I liked the torment applied to the daughter with the balloons. However I was lost with the dental chair torment. That was just... to esoteric and not sexual enough for me. Frankly, it was weird. Respectively, while this forum IS the Bondage Discipline SADISM Masochism Libary, we have to accept the fact that most of the readers here are looking for a SEXUAL experience when they read. The BDSM part is the spice that makes it fun. Some of Dr. Zhang's applied torments felt like me trying to down a spoonful of cinnamon and nothing else.
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Which brings us to the WTF moment near the end of the story. Seriously. WTF? PLASTIC BABIES? FORCED LABOR? Water absorbing plastic fetuses? It just got too weird right there. I was already having issues with the whole dental torment, but to have to read this...
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I'm a father. I have three daughters in fact, and I have been present for each of their births. I have no doubt in my mind that labor is painful, and the emotional torment of delivering in essence twins, knowing that you're actually pushing out two large psuedo-plastic blobs rather than living breathing children must be horrible. Not to mention that in the story the entire pregnancy takes about nine hours. But is LABOR the absolute ULTIMATE painful torture? Really? Hold on... let me ask my wife.
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Oh. She says yes. Never mind.
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I suppose my objection to the final torture, besides the ludicrousness of it, is that it wasn't sexual. It was just... yuck. Major yuck. Effective as hell I'll grant you, but still... definitely a turn off for me. Thank God I had gotten to MY climax during the balloon scene.
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Lastly, I was almost hoping that the story would end with old Otto (one of the Stasi guards) offering to let Angelika meet Dr. Zhang, who supposedly still lives in Berlin. Angelika would agree and the couple, after casting knowing looks at each other, would drive the unwitting report across town. She would be led into a mansion, meet Dr. Zhang, who readily agrees to the interview, commenting "so you want to know how I tortured those women?". She is escorted downstairs, feeling more and more uncomfortable with the situation. She tries to back out but Otto and his wife are there. They emerge in a dungeon, complete with a gynecologist's chair and enough drilling tools to please the American Dental Association. Angelika looks on in horror as Dr. Zhang picks up a drill, turns it on, and tells her to strip.
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Can anyone think "sequel?" Or well. So much for that idea.
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So in summary we've got a decent story with an excellent plot that focuses more on the sadism of the mother and daughter than any sort of sexual deviance and/or combined torture. There are some nuggets of gold in the stream however, and the author proves he's got some serious creative chops. Oddly enough, I haven't read any of his other works. I may have to remedy that.
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Yours Faithfully, Michael Alexander
(www.michaelalexanderstories.com) (7/10)
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- Replied by:
shabbadew2002
(Edit) (Feb 28, 2011)
- Thank you taking the time to read and review this story. Very thoughtful review. This tale is actually a sequel to an earlier tale of mine, Room 29. In this story, I wanted, by using the interview, to show the banality of evil. Neither former guard (not married BTW) really lets their guard down and both hide any doubts behind their "I was just carrying out orders" mindset. It's Angelika's reaction to their horrific recounting of a monstrous,cruel interrogation 38 years earlier that provides a POV for the reader.
These two stories, set in the old GDR, are pure torture stories and not my specialty, but Room 29 has generated the most response of any of my 23 stories on the site. I have since discovered that there are plenty of hard-core fantasy torture fans out there.
I hope you try some of my other stories. The are much more sexual and humiliation oriented. Again thanks for taking the time to respond.
- Replied by:
Michael247
(Edit) (Feb 28, 2011)
- When I have a free moment I will definitely check out Room 29. Thank you!
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