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Cowgirls
Author: ditzylilgirl
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(Added on Jul 24, 2011)
(This month 94495 readers) (Total 133703 readers) |
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Hard times fall on Margaret's family, so her father is forced to sell her as a maid to a stranger passing through town. Unfortunately, for her, the man who buys her has other plans. |
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| Reviewer:
chirachauaapache
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Jan 21, 2016 |
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Well done ditzylilgirl. Many authors here have problems using spell check, you do not. Plus you have an interesting kink (and ability to write) to your story. Only its not Cow"pin" its Cow"pen". And that thing that holds your heroine's head is a "squeeze chute". In my younger days I worked 2 years on a ranch. I very much like that you chose to write this in the first person. It seems you have a very serious and good submissive streak to write this so well from the heroine's point of view.
Again, GOOD GIRL, WELL DONE. Pats to your lovely popo (German slang for butt). (10/10)
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apples
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Dec 1, 2011 |
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Loved it, hopefully there is another part (9/10)
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rocket71
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Jul 28, 2011 |
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Fun story, I'll be looking for next part. (10/10)
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- Replied by:
ditzylilgirl
(Edit) (Jul 29, 2011)
- I'm glad you enjoyed it. I don't know if I'll go back to this story, but I've already written the first chapter of a story with similar ideas and situations. It should be posted the next time the site updates.
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| Reviewer:
Venom
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Jul 25, 2011 |
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Like in your first story, I enjoyed the alternate reality/society you have created. You do not explain why it it possible to sell girls in your world, you just decide it to be so.
This story itself: 8.5-9 out of 10
In the greater context and as an encouragement for you to keep writing: 10 out of 10 (10/10)
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- Replied by:
ditzylilgirl
(Edit) (Jul 29, 2011)
- I was wondering, do you think it's a good thing that I don't explain why it's possible or normal for these things to be happening? I couldn't decide how much to go into the reasons why, so I was curious.
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Venom
(Edit) (Jul 31, 2011)
- It is a good thing not to go too far into details if a story features a special atmosphere. This atmosphere could be downright surreal, or in general any mood that prevents the reader from asking questions about likelihood. Yet the narration has to be coherent and realistic in itself. In your stories (two so far) you achieve said mood with the motif of a remote town. More details would be counterproductive -- comming up with stuff like "changes in society which have led to slavery" would only include the danger of turning unrealistic. The story is just too short to make such a background work.
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nassim
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Jul 25, 2011 |
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Brilliant, and as a bonus, very well written. Looking forward to more chapters & new stories! (10/10)
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- Replied by:
ditzylilgirl
(Edit) (Jul 29, 2011)
- Wow, brilliant? That's a first! Thanks!
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