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a bitch's fall
Author: Pandorius999
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(Added on Mar 4, 2012)
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Megan considers herself the epitome of morality, and believes everyone should emulate her, When her geek crush disagrees, consequences and developments lead megan down the road of retribution |
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Average (?):  (6/10) |
Average
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| Reviewer:
subalo
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May 5, 2012 |
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An editor would help but the story its self was very good in my eyes. (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
Major Littmann
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Mar 4, 2012 |
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Usual problems, capitalisations, punctuation and a plot that isn't thought through too well, it's better than Pandorius's previous efforts, but I cannot describe the writing skills as acceptable hence 5/10. You really should get an editor, there are some good phrases in there. (5/10)
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