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The Writer's Secret
Author: Ann Michelle
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(Added on Mar 25, 2012)
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Loren had no idea what he was getting into when his agent suggested he write transvestite fiction. Nor did he realize how eagerly his wife Stephanie would embrace the idea of feminizing her husband. How far would they go? |
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Average (?):  (9.5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
graymangazer
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May 24, 2012 |
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Hi Anne. I have just started to read your story and I like what I have read so far.
Stephanie, I suspect will turn out to be a really dominant bitch (I hope so!)and Loren is the typical male, he wants to be seen as the strong one but loves being controlled.
This story is actually believably, many others, although enjoyable tend to go off into the realm of fantasy in search of more extreme situations.
but I could really see this relationship happening with the right couple.
I also love your style of writing, the plot skips along nicely.
As I said, I have just started on this story but I have already read enough to award it a 10.
Stephanie is already one of my favorite characters and I am looking forward to reading more about her. Thanks. (10/10)
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- Replied by:
AnnMichelle
(Edit) (Jun 8, 2012)
- Thanks graymangazer! I like Stephanie a lot as well. :)
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Lisa Jones
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May 12, 2012 |
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Most people give a ten mark to say "very good" but, what it actually says is "Could compete well with published authors". Well that is certainly true about this little gem. The writing is a good as it gets on this, or any other site and you would normally have to pay for prose of this quality. The characters and scenarios are plausible, the pacing is spot on, the dialogue sounds as if real people are speaking and, above all else, it's a massive turn on. If sissification is your bag, or even if it's not, give this one a whirl and I promise you'll be glad you did. (10/10)
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- Replied by:
AnnMichelle
(Edit) (May 13, 2012)
- Lisa, Thank you for the kind words! I'm glad you enjoyed it. :)
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Martiniman
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May 6, 2012 |
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Updated 5/6/12...Chapter 7 ended this fabulous story in an amazing & spectacular fashion that was highly erotic, sexy & oh so deliciously dominating. This story now ranks as one of my all time favorites & Ann Michelle has quickly become one of my favorite authors. I also came away from this story with a new favorite character, as I view Stephanie as one hot, erotic, sexy & dominant woman & wife, a woman made from dreams! Now Ann Michelle, lets get working on the sequel to The Writer's Secret!..................Updated 4/22/12...Chapter 6 did not disappoint, the story only got better as Loren falls deeper into submission, while Stephanie's domination continues to get stronger. I have to say, Stephanie is one sexy & erotic lady!............Updated 4/16/12...As good as chapter 4 was, AnnMichelle just turned the heat up another notch with chapter 5. Simply spectacular!..............Updated 4/9/12...Chapter 4 was spectacular! The girls in the shoe store & Loren's humiliation at the hands of Stephanie & the 2 female employees at the uniform store were perfectly erotic to no ends. I'm itching for Chapter 5!............Updated 4/3/12...With chapter 3 this story just got even better. The dinner party was fabulous & it's just so delicious how devious Stephanie is becoming. I can't wait to see what she has planned next for Loren!..........Fabulous story & is just getting better! I don't normally read stories of this nature but it's created & written so well. I love how it's very consensual at the beginning, yet I can see the devious nature in the wife coming out. Very erotic! Can't wait for more!!! (10/10)
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- Replied by:
AnnMichelle
(Edit) (May 13, 2012)
- Martiniman, Thanks for the comments! It's fantastic to hear how much you've enjoyed my story! I hope you enjoy the rest as soon as I can get it written!
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friendlyone23
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May 1, 2012 |
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I absolutely love this story. The way Loren gets dragged into this is just so fun that i find myself constantly checking for updates on this story. Ive been reading stories on this site for years but this is the first one ive fealt strongly enough to give a rating too. I cant wait fo the next chapter to see what Loren will be "forced" to do next. (10/10)
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- Replied by:
AnnMichelle
(Edit) (Jun 8, 2012)
- Thanks friendlyone! I hope to get more finished soon. :)
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urdbm
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Apr 17, 2012 |
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One of the best story on this site... I hope it will continue! (10/10)
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- Replied by:
AnnMichelle
(Edit) (Jun 8, 2012)
- Thanks urdbm, I am indeed working on more!
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69niggsy
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Apr 13, 2012 |
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I have been reading stories on this site for 10 years now and this is one of the best stories I have ever read. Keep up the good work!
PS I registered with the site this week just so that I could give feedback on this story! (10/10)
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- Replied by:
AnnMichelle
(Edit) (Apr 14, 2012)
- Thanks everybody! Thanks for the great comments and the e-mails! I'm glad you're all enjoying the story. :)
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samm
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Apr 9, 2012 |
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Wow, excellent writing! Great setup of the story, it is so lovely how Loren is dragged into his predicament. Can't wait to read how the story unfolds. Thank you Ann Michelle! (10/10)
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- Replied by:
samm
(Edit) (Apr 9, 2012)
- ooh and I forgot to mention it's a great turnon to read too :) *guilty pleasure*
- Replied by:
AnnMichelle
(Edit) (Jun 8, 2012)
- Thanks Sam! I'm glad it's a guilty pleasure! :)
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wistan
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Apr 8, 2012 |
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Great story! I always love it when a writer builds a plausible scenario under which a vanilla person can slide into kink in a realistic way, and this is one of the best. Being asked to write this type of fiction gives Loren a great motivation to want to know about it, and his wife suggesting he do some "research" is a very logical idea. And I love how it's written so that Stephanie is kind of one third helping him do research, one third treating it as one big joke, and one third getting off on it. His mix of resistance and obvious pleasure in what's happening is also very believable.
The writing style is avery accomplished, with a great mix of thoughts, actions, and dialogue, good pacing, and just generally a well written piece.
Very, very good indeed! I can't think of a single criticism to make, so 10/10! Will definitely look for more from this author! (10/10)
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- Replied by:
AnnMichelle
(Edit) (May 13, 2012)
- wistan, Thank you so much! I'm glad you enjoyed it!
(Sorry it took so long to respond, I only just figured out I could respond to each.)
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