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Surprise Guest
Author: WhipMistress320
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(Added on Jul 9, 2012)
(This month 10365 readers) (Total 17851 readers) |
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A man surprises a husband and wife. |
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Average (?):  (5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
Lisa Jones
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Jul 9, 2012 |
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Minimum story length is supposed to be 10,000 characters, this is 3,600. Just over a third. This leaves no room for more than the basics and it comes across as a hurried masturbation fantasy, not a story.
Please, give us more. (5/10)
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